All Comments on 'The Good Son'

by Mr. Unsexy

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Wahoos1000Wahoos1000over 19 years ago
Very erotic

I loved it! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
the good story

Very Sexy. Can't Wait to read more from you.

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchmanover 19 years ago
Very nice story

Very good story. Developed unhurriedly and with good detail, nicely building the tension between the stepmother and son. Personally, I'd have enjoyed a bit more detail of their actual sex act(s), but that's just me and it was well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
It is realy hot very very sexy hot please moe

when i read story like this its make me very hot and dont want to endit that mean that my cum is up over the edge

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very nice

Brilliant story, more please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I just wonder how come the old father got such a sexy looking lady who even married him. Lets keep it real next time

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
fantastic

Next phase of the story plzzź

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Son-in-law

He’s the son of her husband, stepson. Not son-in-law.

TorgauTorgaualmost 4 years ago

Another excellent story, though you could use the services of an editor. I think it would have rated five stars if you'd more fully fleshed out your characters and included a segment where Sonny discovers and reacts to the tryst. Maybe someday you'll write a follow on. As written, the story ends too abruptly for my taste.

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 2 years ago

(2/11/2022) A deserving bastard cucked by neglected horny wifey/step-mommy and young son. A villain, a hero, and a damsel in distress. Short but sweet. Loved it. 5 stars!

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