All Comments on 'On Strike!'

This site is called "Literotica" You got the "Lit" part, but left out the "Erotica"

This belongs in the Humor section if anything.

tee hee! a funny piece, great to read, i could feel the guy was liberated after his decision was made, is there any more?

Say Lit Rot Ica, Lighten up - this is a serious work - a life changing decision isn't made frivolously - is it? You didn't find the dressing up erotic? Maybe you should have your wife help you try it then complain. Then you know how serious this is. So, how was it? Is she though laughing?

Well written worped one (compliment)- Regards

This is the most original, colorful and funny story that I have ever read on literotica, simply the best piece of literature here! Keep up this type of story, I laughed through it all!

Great, inventive story. It's cool that you took something from the news and turned it around, gave it a twist. I thought sending the wife to jail was a bit over the top, but I liked the ending with the daughter. And it is very well written.

It was a great story, but you left a few things out. Exactly why was the wife sent to jail - trying to run over people? Shouldn't he consider divorcing her while she is in prison, so that 1) his life is happier, 2) she won't get any of the money that will be coming his way ( a restraining order would also be a good idea)? Lastly, what changed in his relationship with his daughter? Did she start doing chores, and appreaciate him for who he is, and what he has done for her welfare?

I really enjoyed the story - it was amusing but well written. I look forward to seeing more of that story sometime soon !

I thought that story was going in a completely different direction than the one it took. I'm not sure the daughter should have gotten of as easily as she did, but it's your story and it definitely works.

Y'know ... every once in a while I find an author on here that I really enjoy reading. I hate it when a good story is butchered by bad grammar and even worse spelling. For crying out loud, do some people think those wavy red, blue, and green lines are festive? Thanks for being such a good writer.

Christie

Thank you that was such a giggle . :-)

Now that’s funny!!

Yeah I thought it was very funny too