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the duality in your work...

I read this:

~I couldn’t take another round.

I pour in Epson salts, just a little and then a lot.

If the bell rings,

I’ll be glass.

I’ll take the fall. ~

and I'm not sure if it's hard sex that you accept or a beating you took when things went wrong..there is a sense of fatality..and yet calm in this all that really leaves it open to a few interpretations.

I like it alot though, there is a part of me, that winces.

Don't stop writing

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