continue this story. It is so hot and you are anwsome writer.
Very vivid, kinda wish I was there watching the erotic scene....
that was so fucking hot. please continue it.
Chapter 5 gonna be done soon?
Please please please hurry up with chapter five! I don't know if I can wait mch longer, that's so very hot!
Carson, you make me absolutely howl. The image of the central character beating off with the jockstrap in mouth ... it was so hot and yet so hysterical as well that you left me frantic to know what to do with myself. I love the 80's pastiche and the bad boy image of his object of adoration. Great fun and hot reading all around.
chapter 5 better becoming soon, i can get impatient lol. loved the story, youre an awesome writer, cant wait for more
it was a awsome story please write more soon consider me an anxious fan
Absolutely love the story. Is there anymore to come? Please?
When do we get to read about their first love-making?
I'm working on a novel and kind of abandoned poor Tyler and Travis. Bad writer! Bad!
I'm so mad that I'm a girl right now. That got my tight little pussy sooooo wet!!
Cute and all, but the Dear Diary method is such a difficult way to tell a story. I'd say any of your other stories beats this series by two times.
I just read the post you left, carson. SHIT! I am now dying for the rest of the story and it looks like I'm not gonna get. *pouting like a girl*
hot as hell!
Quick, finish it!... Now! A very hot story and I absolutely loved it!! You actually made me pant!!LOL:)
Umm, there's gonna be many more chapters of this isn't there?? I love the slow build-up and I know it is gonna take some time for them to get through all of the acts that they want to do. So Please! More of this.
Your writing is fabulous and so real. Very very hot and believable.
that is so hot it made me cum
I've just finished the "Diary" series & want more!! You're just so good at weaving a story! *insert Deity of choice here* has blessed you with such an awesome talent ..... that you should continue this until the boys are completely sated. Y'know, take them thru age 30 or so. ;-) Thanks for sharing your talent & providing fantasy fodder!
So fucking HAWT! I hope you're working on more.
Loved this series, its hot,sexy and fun.Hope u r going to post more chapters. Cant wait for the next write u dip in this diary
omgosh!! more more more!!!
i want to know how this turns out!!
come on finish the masterpiece plzzzzzzz :)
I want more! I neeed more. This is so hot. xxxxxxxxxx
....going to finish this series? Please don't leave us hanging.....what happens next for these guys?
There has got to be some more to the story... this is amazing and I believe I speak for the rest when I say I want more to it....
Nah, carsonshepherd has been off Lit for 7 years. Damn, I wanted to read the end of this because Travis and Tyler are really hawt.
we went through all those chapters building up the sexual tension between them. This dance they did and then when they finally get to it, all they do is let him blow Travis? We don't even get to hear them both say what they want, etc? It was definitely a disappointing ending. There should have been another chapter where they get with each other with more time to do it and for Travis to say what he wants from him. Is it just to get his cock sucked or does he want more? Oh well.
I AM SO ANGREY..... YET ANOTHER STORY LEFT WITH NO END IN SIGHT. I THINK WRITERS WHO DO THIS SHOULD HAVE THERE FINGERS SNAPPED OFF SO THEY CANT TORCHER US READERS ANY MORE. ?????????????? VERY DISAPOINTING END...........
So....db you can't even properly type a sentence or spell a word, and you want to complain about the author? That's kinda funny....
Really liked this. It's a shame you (carsonshepherd) aren't writing anymore. Would be fantastic to see where this goes.
Please please continue can't get enough of this couple. It would be a shame to end know. More please :)
so freaking hot. very good
but no ending... sad times
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