by Willow Rain
and you've captured the " waiting room" feelings both yours and those around you, perfectly.
You have a lot of talent and a fresh way of saying things.
stick around..
A second installment in a heart-wrending tale. I dare not breath for fear I will crack this brittle moment. Thanks for reminding us how many lives are affected.
This is by far one of the best poems I have ever read on this site. Wonderful and real. Lovely work.
An incredibly powerful narrative read; this could be about any waiting room atmosphere, but it isn't. It's about one of those decisions only a woman can and might have to make.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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there had to have been a mate,that cared, TK U MLJ LV NV