All Comments on 'Urban Predator'

by ObsidianMan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
All hail the King!!

I don't know where you learned to write like that, but as a literary maven, I beg you NEVER STOP!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
i love this. buttt...

I liked this comment the words and the talkabout you being in the jungle...I loved it...but it should have gone further with the sex of the girl in the end...

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