All Comments on 'Benefits Package'

*grinning madly* ... Wonderful story. Great pace and description. And the closing line was out of the this world!!

I don't usually go for the non-human type of stories, but man, I just loved this. Hot, sexy, and more than a little funny (the last line was priceless). Two very enthusiastic thumbs up - I'll look forward to more reading.

~ Rose

Very Awesome Story Cindee, alot of creative and ingenious ideas in this story ... not to mention a twist of humor in the end ... wonderful job!

The native american thing really got me... and its nice to see passion without needing to hear "I've love you from a distance for so long, now you're mine forever" It was business convenience... yet they had the perfect tryst. One of my favorites for sure!

that was the best one ive ever read

Really Cute! Good Job