All Comments on 'Railway Slut Adventures Ch. 01'

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BlackDahlia69BlackDahlia69over 16 years ago
A Train Ride to Remember

Nothin' like takin' on two guys, includin' one ol' fart, on a movin' train no doubt. Your words made me feel like I was gettin' eaten and fucked. Thank ya, chile!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
crap

Whatever

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Disappointing

I like the idea of sex on a train with 2 guys, but the characters you've chosen didn't do your base idea justice. 2 old ugly (1 married) guys isn't fantasy for many women dare i say, likewise, you described a very pretty, sexy, young woman -- then made her entire personality into 'i only want to dress up so old men perv on me' which makes me think you're very out of touch with women - aka a large section of the audience on this site

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Walking the earth, having adventures and shit. Not looking for any hook-ups, I just want to get me stories out there and have a chat on the forums.

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