All Comments on 'Kathy Comes to Dinner Ch. 01'

Great Start!! Anxious for the next chapter. I appreciate the genre and understand your rant.

Great start to a new story.

I see you havealready published this at other sites; so I expectwe won't have to wait long for the other instalments.

Thank Eros for Peter! Why do people complain about well written stories in a genre that doesn't turn them on? I wouldn't bother objecting to the 4 millionth story of the "she begged for it, I slammed it home" genre, after all. Keep up the great work, Peter!

Thank you for you beginning comments. If people don't like the genre, please don't complain about it - just don't read it! A great story so far, keep it up.

At your suggestion , I have not read your story because I dislike the genre. I only comment to disagree with your preamble indicating that 'MANY people like this kind of story and find it exciting. At age 60, I know many people and do not know of one who finds this genre exciting or erotic. Obviously we know different people . I would only suggest that your preable state that "many of the people I know" like this kind of story, without any disclaimer that many other people despise this kind of story. Thanks for the opportunity to comment. 60 year old George

A wonderful story. Please keep them coming. Thanks.

Many of us do love the genre and love reading about it

A really fine start. I can't wait to read the series. Keep writing and don't let THEM get you down.

You made it interesting enough for me to read on to ch. 2 since originally ch.4 is the one that popped up first and when I read a couple of sentences in that ch. and wanted to start from the beginning. Well im ready to find out what happens in ch.2

Peter, sorry if you've been getting negative reaction here. The magic of orgasm denial is that men can only have one for a few seconds, so if you extend the "approach", especially for a few days, or God forbid, a week or two, the whole experience not only lasts much longer, but builds the desire and intensity so much that it's like a trip some other planet. While denied, you cannot think of anything else and the waiting and eventual reward are beyond overwhelming. So I share your interest in this genre and in fact it's the ultimate of any kind of writing, and you do it well, with a complete understanding of what it's all about.