All Comments on 'Our Story: The Beginning'

Good pacing, not too fast but wise decision not to try and stretch it out for pages, also enough detail to form an image but not so much that I couldn't fill in the details that worked for me with my imagination. Nice work.

the story held me right to the end and had me shaking with excitement .

a well thought out story

You have an amazing way of telling a story that it all sounds very real. I read episode one and then decided to read this one to get the begining.

Keep up the great writing - im now off to read the rest of your great series.

It held my attention to the end. Frankly, got me hard. Love the story and all of the sequels. Can't wait for the next one.

I was not there to see my wife and her daughter have sex for the first time, but from their telling of the story it went down almost exactly like this did. Masturbation in front of each other turning into full-blown insectuos sex. A+++ staory. Hard from beginning to end. Thank you!

GREAT STORIES GOT HARD READING THEM,SO HAD TO FINISH IT .WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE STORIES FROM YOU.

dumbass bisexual slut. have fun with stds.

As a fellow Author, I must Digress, that while your idea may be good, the content and "He said she said" Dialog style makes this the worst story i have ever read, it was so bad that i couldn't even masturbate to it.

wish that I was the neighbor

DKP

Very hot woman to woman sex !! Its very arousing to see 2 women go at each other; as its so different than a male/female or guys. Its very arousing and hot. The closeness and intensity...... there is something about it that is so captivating. Women who have shared that are quite specific about how complete that can be.

So, the next chapter should be Stacy & Heather eating each other out and cumming in more detail plus adding in a guy to share who has the stamina to go a long way.

Very hot and arousing, thank you !

Beautiful smoking hot cunts,for sucking and fucking.

It excited me!I want to be also their neighbors.