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Merry Christmas~
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yes, yes, yes!!! oh! sorry, was reading ur poem and dayyyumn, man, u r good! the poem's wonderful 2! ;-) after reading this, i feel i must go ravage my man and with any luck, his friend 2. :-) in all due respect, u really put the reader in the moment, i almost smelled the sex. damn good poem.
ensightful
i found myself drawn into the story, wanting to know what else he fantasized about. he obviously knows a womans desires and finds a perfect medium to express his fantasy of a woman who is very powerful indeed.
Whew!
Very, verrrrrrrry HOT!! Well done!
Hot!
A very descriptive and tantalizing fantasy.
yeahh
you seem to know what a woman wants.
fuck me? ;)
EXCELLENT!!!
Very nice.. I think every woman could get into that!
yummm
very nice joe thank you
MMMMMM HMMMMMM..........
Very nice!!
thank you
once again ty
OMG
I wish I could give this poem 200 it was so hot and sexy
woah
thats what its like when youre in love. even when youre apart from the other person, they make your heart race, and you know you do the same to them. anyways, this is like a story my man told me once. good work.
r.
Awesome
Hey Good to see your piece again.
Bravo!
That was wonderful
You captured my attention, I need more of your poems
Delicious!
MMMM so yummy...I'm wet..need more! Great poem/shortie-loved it much *kiss*
In Awe of U AwesomeJoe...Mmmmm
The beauty and sensuality of what you've composed is magnificent. I was so Impressed by the inherent passion and hot lust....yet sincere expression of a deeply spirited union of love. Damn....I'm in awe...that was amazing. It took my breathe away. Keep it up!!
Good reading!
Animal lust between two human lovers at its best! I am going to send this one to my girlfriend.
descriptive.
A man who likes to share all the private details of his erotic activity. Quite graphic.
Too Good!!
I'm a regular reader on Literotica, and I must say, this is one of the most impressive poems I have come across. I'm more of a story person than a poem person, but this poem is a hell of a lot better than a lot of stories I've come across on this site and others! Keep up the good work!!
GREAT
Wow just Wow! Loved it!
A FANTASY 4 LOVE
liver 4 the future. TK U MLJ LV NV
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