All Comments on 'Babysitter Free For All'

nice story for your first attempt. could've avoided cumming in her and not leave evidence. that would let you nail her again the next time she baby sat.

If this is your first atempt next time use spell check. Also it's a little short but the premise isn't bad...good luck.

WAY TO FUCKING SHORT WAY TO FUCKING RETARDED IT WAS A HORRIBLE STORY U STUPID BITCH

I hope that you don't expect us to believe of this, even if it is only imaginary, still, you cut it of way to o early, makes it seem you lost interest, or ran out of gas, in either case, way to short what a waste for you and your readers, my advice don't write anymore.

You guys are crazy (sick :-), so Literotica. He was a youngster, no? No wonder that he emptied himself inside her or else the story would not sound believable.

Compared to some of the stories on here this just isn't hot or sexy.

The story was good enough to make someone believe it really happened. It would have been better though if you would have used your 'spell & grammar check' before you posted it.

I wish he would have said he knocked her up.

There are a lot of mistakes that a 8 year old wouldn't do so if your under 18 STOP READING THIS AND STOP WRITING THIS