All Comments on 'Pretty Vivi'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Oh Mercy...

Why can't I have a neighbor like that? I'd be losing my keys, borrowing sugar, whatever it took....oh baby!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Ay Papi

Gawd i luv to hear a guy's Spanish accent, especially during those tender moments.... ooh lalaa ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice

Nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
damn..

where is this boy at? Don't stop, writing that was HOT...

ComixgrlComixgrlabout 12 years ago
Good story

Nice story, I'm personally not into accents or men who speak other languages but there was something a lil sexy about the things he kept saying to her :) GOOD JOB!

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