All Comments on 'Beach Villanelle'

by sandspike

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flyguy69flyguy69about 19 years ago
Fun poem!

The light-hearted humor wonderfully contrasts the formal structure. Well done, Spike!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
villanelle

I thought about trying to write one of those too

but I don't like mine, I loved yours <grin>

love the beach play, hehehey! nice~

foehnfoehnabout 19 years ago
LOL

I think you're right, Boo bested you with this form.

But I'm giving you a 5 anyhow; it's a damned hard form to do well. I've never succeeded with it.

And, well, there was some really nice stuff here.

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
!!!

you just make me wanna jump in the car and head for the coast, thank you, this is a wonderful. bouyant diversion ;)

doormousedoormouseabout 19 years ago
Loved this

You worked this really well. I've done a couple myself using repetition, and loved the rhythm of yours.

Great job. ;-)

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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The form, the scene, spot on.

Form's done so well that the scene flows seamlessly, strengthening both.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Beach Scene

Spending time at the beach and writing about it ~ not the worst way to go.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BLUE WATER BECKONS

far out to sea. TK U MLJ LV NV

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