XXXmas Party

liked the set up and the action...

however, this would've been soooooo much better had you written the story in a past tense. it would've read better i think. also, next time you write a group-sex story, it'll help if you give a good description of everybody involved so that the reader can really picture things easily and get your characters to stand out.

loved it

loved it so much i came to it and this is one of my fantasies is to have this acted out please feel free to contact me anytime

...that was hot