All Comments on 'Captured Starshine'

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sacksackover 19 years ago
Rhyming poems are difficult...

and this is much better than the normal run. Just curious, why were her seas brown? To rhyme with drown?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
seas of brown

I liked it. And seas of brown are her brown eyes.

Always hated english, destroying someone's work by trying to find some artsy sub meaning.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Beautiful poem...

the words make it come alive...

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 17 years ago
This. . .

was lovely. ~ Red

GianettaGianettaover 4 years ago
Heartfelt

Rhythmic and enthralling it has its own visual sensuality

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