by melanie rose 2008
Pretty good first story. A little bit too flowery and overly dramatic for me, but I still liked it.
I like stories such as this with a buildup and then the quick letdown. You never gave a hint that this wouldn't become another threesome in the living room story. I really would like to see more though. Very hot!!!
connie
a great story it needs no
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guess what a story in the INCEST area that DOESN'T contain any INCEST. once again a stupid writer puts their story in. the wrong catagory, this belongs in the erotic couples area. MAKE SURE TO USE THE PROPER CATAGORIES THEY HAVE THEM FOR A REASON. if you aren't smart enough to know what catagory to use then you shouldn't be posting here.