All Comments on 'First Encounter Ch. 01'

that was fabolous i enjoyed every word of it.i hope you write more about these two...

Thank you lil angel for turning on to this work of yours. Very good! See you again !

Robert

angel, that was by far the best story i've read so far! and i've read a lot! LOL you MUST do the next chapter!

baby this was wonderful I can't wait to read more of Yer work thanks so much for letting me see some of Yer work hugs tight

ele

I found your writing to be quite readable and mildly entertaining, but the change from past to present tense, sometimes in the same sentence, was a little distracting.

A good first work. Keep writing, you are young and clearly have many talents which I am sure will develop with time.

Zero Tolerance

You're an amazing writer. Thanks for sharing this story and all your work with me. I too, look forward to chapter 2.