All Comments on 'Yellow Ch. 01'

that was great. i could go for a fucking like that.

The rest of the story is actually posted in Erotic Couplings. I felt that Group Sex wasn't the most fitting category.

the suspense and foresight is going on in my mind of what is going to happen next.

very nice; engaging. you let us know what the characters are thinking, and feeling; i felt swept along by the plot. much richer than a play-by-play.