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All Comments on 'Katie Surprises Herself'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
excellent story....i loved it

the story was excellent ....a part two would be nice. Keep up the good work

Flashlight7.5Flashlight7.5about 19 years ago
Not bad, but could've been more

It's not bad at all. You build it up and use the framing device well. Some problems are glaring, however. "4 Ultra-Hot college guys" made me wince. It's good for what it is though, a simple X-rated short story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
more of Katie?

Where does Katie go from here? Think this character could be developed some more. Hope she shows up again & soon in new stories!

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