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A Second Chance

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by Chagrined01/28/05

Awesome

FANTASTIC! You pulled together a lot of emotion on that one. i loved it.I found when he reached out to caress her face terribly intimate. i love this story. Does it tug at the heart strings? Yep But I loved it for all of that!

Great read. Where do they go from here?

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by Bridget6901/28/05

Very touching.

Great story of childhood sweethearts being reunited at last. Loved it!

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by Ronnie Wachuka01/29/05

A 19 Hanky Job

My friend you have it to a "T."
I lost my wife of over 34 years 9 years ago.
I've tried 6 times to write that story and it's still too raw.
I just wish there was a Liz waiting in the wings. Carry on, please.

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by sack01/30/05

a sad one.....

glad I'm not the only one writing sad stories! Very well done and kept my interest!

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by rozezwild05/28/05

nicely done

It was great well thought out and well wrote -- kept my attention and a tear in my eye

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