All Comments on 'A Second Chance'

by ~hellbaby~

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ChagrinedChagrinedabout 19 years ago
Awesome

FANTASTIC! You pulled together a lot of emotion on that one. i loved it.I found when he reached out to caress her face terribly intimate. i love this story. Does it tug at the heart strings? Yep But I loved it for all of that!

Great read. Where do they go from here?

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Very touching.

Great story of childhood sweethearts being reunited at last. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A 19 Hanky Job

My friend you have it to a "T."

I lost my wife of over 34 years 9 years ago.

I've tried 6 times to write that story and it's still too raw.

I just wish there was a Liz waiting in the wings. Carry on, please.

sacksackabout 19 years ago
a sad one.....

glad I'm not the only one writing sad stories! Very well done and kept my interest!

rozezwildrozezwildalmost 19 years ago
nicely done

It was great well thought out and well wrote -- kept my attention and a tear in my eye

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent

Words fail me. What a beautiful sad wonderful tale.

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