All Comments on 'Cast Aside'

by Krenna Smart

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Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Haunting

this was a haunting taunt of moments... looking at things cast away that we allow to sit in the shadows of living..used up, ignored.. only to see value when we cast our eyes away from the obvious and learn to breath again.

Nice..

du lac

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
far from dreary

although you do liken the "leaving" to a much dreaded season, I love the rhythm, you gave this poem a musical soul. I like the way this made me feel, thank you :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A haunting piece of desolation left in the wake of her departure.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
BUT LIKE THE PHOENIX AND PUFF

whose fates are undecided, TK U MLJ LV NV

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