by EarlChick
"...teasing myself with your groan…" What a powerful image! The entire piece is littered with little gems of emotion and an intuitive sort of sensuality that makes the project more than just the sum of its parts. A lovely example of what two intelligent, passionate writers can do together.
Oh, my God. That was an amazing story. Every thing about it was breathtaking. I could imagine every sensation, feel every breath and hear every moan. Your descriptions are so original and unexpected; it set the story apart from others I've read, even fantastic ones. I'd love to read more.
...This is one of the hottest story I have read in a while! It had me reaching hot and bothered in 2 seconds flat! I am still tingling from the sweet sensations of this story...
This story was a perfect recount of my experiences with my lover. very well done. Thanks.