All Comments on 'Mama Mia Ch. 01'

I hope you continue with this. This story shows promise. Your writing acurately captured the pace and mood wihtin the club scene. I would like to get more details of what they, feel, think, taste like....

Reading this story is like engaging in breath taking foreplay when your partner knows exactly where and how to touch you and right when you're on the brink of..........................NOTHING!!!!! No fair, you need to finish this story.

Heated!!!