The story jerked my chain. I've been there, only it was cancer. I don't care how long ago it happened it will come back. Raw and Well done with some humor thrown in. Thank you.
Thank you for the days...
Those endless days those sacred days you gave me...
I`m dreaming of the days...
I won`t forget a single day believe me...
I bless the light...
I bless the light that shines on you believe me...
And though you`re gone...
You`re with me every single day believe me.
A very sad story indeed. However you need not apologise for writing it. One of the great things about Literotica is that every story does not have to be a stroke story. Thanks,David
Death cannot defeat love,
your story makes this clear.
thank you for writing this.
Probably the most relevant thing ever posted on this site. A truely beautiful story! Thank you for sharing it.
To love once better than not to have loved at all.
Sad enough to bring tears to my eyes, yet it certainly wasn't nonerotic! No sex scenes in the story, who cares? What could be more erotic than expressing your love for such a wonderful woman, someone that you'll remember the rest of your life!
You're just jerking our chains when you say this story has no entertainment value whatever. This is a romance story if I ever saw one. Just because you didn't go into detail on the sex doesn't mean that there wasn't a passionate love between the two of you. This should be eligible for a prize.
Anything written from the heart is always worthwhile, no matter what category it's in! I wish there were more stories like this on Literotica, and I'm sure these memories are still raw. Thanks for having the courage to share them!
The only thing that was more obvious than the pain was the love. No apology needed for this Dave, because it was clearly a product of love. Thanks so much for sharing.
A truly wonderful story. It touched me deeply.
Thank you, dave, for sharing your love story. What a great gift. eric
I read this story yesterday and cried...I thought I was just feeling emotional. Today I read it again and cried again so it's decided, I'm not emotional; your story is just DAMN GOOD!!!
Never apologize for writing quality Dave. This story is wonderful and well written just the way it is.
Thank you for writing it.
One minute I'm laughing my butt off at the mention of the batusi, the next minute I'm losing it the other way. Wonderful!
How could I have missed this entry? Good luck!
Somehow I missed this, shame on me! Beautiful and so touching. Good luck!
What a beautiful story. I've always believed that our very best stories come from the heart, and often no matter how hard we may try to keep them bottled up, because maybe they're too hard to relive or express or share with others, they still always find a way to come back out. Writing can be catharsis in it's purest form, and as readers we are all the better for your sharing this expereince. Great job and good luck on the contest...
heartfelt and so very beautiful. Thanks for sharing this with us all
This is a wonderful story, well written and very moving. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Nice job! ~Imp
Well written, loved this!
I wish I could be like David Watts!
David, Love Story, Message in a Bottle and Thank You For the Days. There are many tragic true stories but only a few people great enough to tell them. Thank you for sharing. I read it when it first came out and was too emotional to write anything. I have had two great losses in my life and you hit the right chords. Thanks again Dave.
Sad but very beautiful.Made me teary
But this story made me remember how. Beautiful, heart and soul and everything that comes between written in such a way that a stone would dissolve under it. Thank you for sharing this, for letting us see a piece of something as old as time and as true as love. Thank you.
There something extra special when a little songbird can sang no more. Anyone who isn't touched by this has to have had his heart removed. Seldom have I read a story so sad; and, yet so unbelievably beautiful.
it got to me.
That I get pissed off about every time I see it mentioned on the Comments Portal. I know that I've got to go and read the damn thing yet again.
I know its going to upset me, but I also know I've got to read it one more time. I don't know whether to thank the author or curse him. DC
Six years ago I lost my Soulmate, my Lover, my Everything to the lymphoma. I see her face in my mind, I feel her being within my body, I feel her love in my heart, I will love her forever and ever and ever
Everytime I read your story, it brings many tears to my eyes.
I'm sorry for your loss David.
" It's better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all ". cheers
I'm so sorry...
So beautifully written, a tale of tragedy.
im so sorry, I can't imagine anything more painful...
No one in their right minds could be indifferent about a story like this. Words can't express the empathy I have for you right now, but I guess what doesn't kill us'll only make us stronger. Beautiful story and, imo, THE best story on Literotica.com. Thanks a million and God bless!
I don't usually cry over stories or movies, but this time around I had to shed a tear.
Not only because it was a caring story but also because I'm going through something similar myself... I'm sick at the moment and I don't know exactly what's wrong and all I've been getting done are tests and more tests, each one coming back with good but not so good news.
I thank you for sharing your story with everyone.
A beautiful story, I'm so sorry for your loss
In 1998 I lost my wife of 38 years to cancer. In telling your story you are also telling mine and the many others who have borne this terrible loss
Thankyou for doing it so beautifully.
They gave each other the best night that they could. And screw authority that wanted her to die in their "care" and not in his love. Lots of tears. I am sorry for your loss but I thank you. JT in AB
You needn't apologize for writing this story. It was tender and touching. Unfortunately, it didn't have a happy ending, but it was full of romantic love. I think "Thank You for the Days" requires a "Thank You for the Story." Great writing.
thanks a lot for sharing your story
For "Thank You for the Days".
you evoked such dramatic emotions in me while reading your wonderful story. Just terrific!
Needs to be told. Beautiful, eloquent, heartfelt.
when you both know you got it together. TK U MLJ LV NV
either left or to go. Do it with dignity. TK U MLJ LV NV
but damn, I really hate stories like this --FIVE STARS
Very nice story. Major bummer, but very nice. Full marks.
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