by carsonshepherd
Hot and steamy. You never disappoint! And God help me, I'm actually getting used to "all the sudden"!
This story has the unmistakable ring of truth. Having been in a similar situation, I can tell you a pushy bottom can be lots of fun for an enlightened Top.
Carson, this was just so freakin'hot. You never cease to amaze me. This line especially rocked me: 'I twist silently crucified on the head of a pin for an eternal motionless moment until he moves again'
Damn, boy! Just completely different and brilliant as usual. Love, S.
You give the absolute best writing exercise I have ever had. The way you write makes my toes curl, my head spin and…nevermind. :o What I meant to say is that your work is redolent in sensuality and you paint a wickedly perfect picture with words. Excellent.
Phew! Another example of exceptional writing from a very talented writer who never fails to amaze me with his evocative ( or should I say, provocative...) style and overwhelming passion.
myself, but this is a gritty "view from the top" as it were. Proof that a stroke story can be as rewarding as a more "profound" tale, I enjoyed the white-hot intensity of this!
my ass...or your ass!! :) I LOVE IT...it was hot, exciting. I'd say you're the tops...but I guess you're the bottom kinna fits??
~ Honey
I give you two thumbs up cause I only got two but I gave you a five vote, good story, Lisa.
I like what you did with this -- honed right in on the intensity and left that bothersome plot shit in the hallway. ;o) ~Imp
Never have truer words been spoken. Awesome and exciting tale. Fun to top from the bottom, if you can get away with it. *smirk*
Maestro, play on!
"You know what I fucking hate? Someone who fucking tops from the bottom." I LUV that! I'm hating/loving you more with each story. I'm jealous of/grateful for evey one of them that I have read. Keep it up. (No pun intended...LOL)
Hot, intense, fun. Loved it. I'm loving them all. Keep up the sexy goodness.
Someone who tops from the bottom!
I am enjoying this so much, reacquainting myself with your stories!
Your way with words never ceases to amaze me. I wish I had half your talent.
Writing is an art and you really know how to paint with words. Beautiful story.
I loved it, it was well paced, well written and just fine.great job.