by RazzRajen
Happy to see you received an E.
Lots of great phrases in this one.
But I must admit that I don't like disemboweled--no matter how it's used. I'm a squeamish person with a list of icky words I don't like in poems. lol
Awesome job! Great imaginary, and word choice. I most definitely enjoyed :)
......enjoy BDSM grounded poetry but this one brings out the sensuality and erotica. Beautifully written and I agree with the "E".
.........don't usually enjoy or even read BDSM grounded poetry but I'm glad I read this one. It brings out the sensuality and erotica. I agree with the "E" too.
(I already commented but it didn't seem to get through so I hope this isn't a repeat. hic!)
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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