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Particle Accelerator

bySander Roscoe Wolff©
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by Liar02/03/05

Review...

Your poem have been mentioned in the New Poems tread at the poetry forum.

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by Angeline02/03/05

Loved it!

You have a great ear for language. I think your poem has a natural musical rhythm. I love the subtle internal rhyme and assonanace, too. I really look forward to reading more by you. :)

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by Syndra Lynn02/04/05

Lovely

I like this a lot and feel you could tighten it a lot by cutting some word baggage. Nice feelings.

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