All Comments on 'Kelly'

Nice, suave and creative, good use of the language!

A very good, well-written, easy-to-read story. More like this, please.

Lukas

Yeah - I had the burning, blood, and mess after it was over. Didn't reach organism until the third time we did it - but the first will stay with me forever. Happened in my room, in my own bed and it took a little expaining to Mom.....

Wish he had been that gentle....

Good story.

He came too quick. Smh