All Comments on 'From Afar Ch. 10'

Is there any more of this story?

I'd really love to read more of this story. I hope you add more soon.

I hope you finish this story soon. Can not wait for the rest of it.

Hate to be like everyone else but more more

It was a fun story

awww where is the rest of the story ??? -pout-

i hope u are going to finish this story, its really sad to leave it like this dont u think?

Please I can't stand the wait anymore, its been four years The suspense is killin me..... I am dyin' to know what happens between Sara and Chad... I Love your stories but this is my favorite one.... I hope this message motivates you to posting the next chapter of your story.

Awww... C'mon! Don't leave us hanging! It's a great, touching story. Please finish. I'm dying to know the rest of the it!

Please come back and write us more I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!

The whole thing is well done. Some spelling errors, but plot so compelling, great character development. I agree with the rest of your fanbase--MORE!

Please keep going.

What happened to rest of the story?

I utterly love reading this series. But please, please continue!

Absolutely loved this story but I can't believe thats it. I want more :(

Great but please finish your stories cos Swans as well still needs to be finished too!

Where the heck is the rest of the story???????!!!!!

uh... so what happened next?

Six years later and still no update lovely really lovely...I have no idea why you would write a story and leave it half way..freakin ridiculous!!!!!

what happens next?

it is REALLY not normal for her to leave it hanging like this..much as i hate to do this...i have an idea, maybe someone else could continue the story? please? jeez, now i've been reduced to begging..i would write a suitable follow-up to the story if i could..but i can't..so, somebody do something.

OMG! Dun tell me that was the end..

It will be scary...

I hope you will continue it!

It's really heartbreaking to see what is happening to Chad and Sara's relationship...

Please dun tell me Bianca really wrecked everything!

Please do continue it!

I absolutely love the story...and it deserves 100 but i am completely disappointed with the writer! how can u move on to other stories without finishing what you've started!?!?! Way to let down your readers! It is amazing but it is incomplete therefore leaving your readers unsatisfied!! It really is quite disappointing! :-(

im giving u 100 cause i really liked the story but how can you write stories and leave them incomplete?! u said ur going to finish them though i notic that was almost 3 years ago, if your not going to finish stories you start maybe next time think before starting them, it's a really good story and im keen to see it completed...jsut wish you would

Totally got sucked into an unfinished story. Nice!

It's been 8 years since you updated the bloody story! You should be ashamed of yourself. It's already 2009. Whnd the hell are you ever goingnto update?!

plz finish it i wanna read more dont leave me hangin

I really hate cliffhangers! PLEASE finish the story!!!

Can someone tell me. Is this part still the flash back?

Is this really how it ends?

Is this the end? If so it really ended depressing and really wondering how bad Chad screwed up. This chapter started with him talking about causing his wife pain this past year so it could be bad.

This is a pretty good story but it can't just end there. I've read it before, and remembered it and wondered if it was ever finished, only to read it all the way again and find out that it never was. Please finish/post the rest of the story!

why do you all do this? Update soon will you???

A shame as it had potential to be a great story

CAN SOMEONE FINISH WHAT THIS WRITER OBVIOUSLY COULDN'T BE BOTHERED TO?

Heartbreak this was getting good

Are you kidding me don't stop it!

tease much, ya killing me. update soon please.

You might well remove this whole one page per chapter submissions if you can't even finish this story. .. You say to be continued, quit yanking our chains and submit an ending or just take it all down!!!!!

OK why didn't you finish the story before you started another one you suck

Finish this story or I will punch you in the ovary!!!

the appropriate ending

Chad was so caught up in his stardom that he forgot how delicate Sara's feelings were or how insecure she got when he was away for so long. Dealing with pregnancy alone was seriously not how Sara thought it would be. But Chad was always busy with the shooting. Even when he was home he had to meet with coaches to improve his acting ,that she just felt like an outsider all the time. Even when they were spending time together she didn't have anything to contribute to their conversations. Sara started feeling like a failure. That's when she decided to concentrate completely on her baby. Every time there was a doctor's appointment Chad would either be away for shooting or busy on the phone. Everytime he missed the doctor's appointment, it hurt her a little more. Then doctor too started giving her sympathetic glances. The stress ultimately caught up to her. Doctor advised her complete bedrest because her blood pressure was through the roof. It started affecting the health of her unborn child.

Chad was out of state for shooting. He was missing his Sara. All he wanted was to finish the shooting and get back to his wife. He was missing out on so much. He missed so many of the doctor's appointment that everytime he called his wife he was overcome with guilt. The only support he got was from Bianca. She was the only one who understood him when he said he was guilty for being away from his wife. Others were still cautioning him about the impact this would have on his marriage. He thought he could make up for it by finishing the shooting soon and being with Sara .

Unbeknownst to Chad,Bianca had developed an infatuation for him. She often wondered about her fascination with men. Especially when the men were married, it was like knowing that something is unattainable just made it more tempting. And nothing excited Bianca more than a temptation like that. She just wanted a taste of this forbidden fruit. Bianca had no intention of settling down anytime soon.

She used to invite Chad to join her for dinner, during which she tried to coach him for his role. Chad was just greatful for the help. Some of his co-workers just turned a blind eye. Some were not so understanding. Slowly the rumours started spreading how close the two were. Someone had even taken a picture of the two sharing meals together.

Sara was on her 7th month. She was already in love with her unborn child. They had decided to wait until the birth to know the sex of their child. Chad had arranged for a housekeeper and butler to help Sara with anything she needed. Mrs.Grace was more than a housekeeper for Sara. She insisted that Sara should call her Gracy .They slowly built up a deeper friendship. She confided all her fears and insecurities in Gracy. Gracy tried to console her. It was clear as day for anyone to see how devoted Chad was as a husband but she also understood Sara's insecurities. For Chad's birthday Sara decided to give a surprise for him and arranged for an elaborate romantic dinner. Chad was supposed to come home that night. She even went shopping for the perfect dress to flatter her pregnant belly. But Chad never came home that night. She tried calling him but it went straight to the voice mail. Heartbroken,she cried herself to sleep. The next afternoon Sara had a doctor's appointment. Gracy had offered to take Sara but she wanted some time alone for herself. The doctor's appointment went well though the doctor was a bit concerned about the unusually pale face of Sara.

The moment Sara stepped off the clinic there was several flashes going off , a mic was shoved to her face. Sara couldn't comprehend the situation at first. Then her mind tried to make sense and she heard the questions,"how are you feeling about Chad's affair with Bianca","did you suspect this was going on","do you plan to stay married to him"....so many things were happening at the same time. She just broke down as tears started running down her cheeks. She couldn't take it anymore..but the paparazzis were not pacified easily. The pounced on her like hungry vultures when she started crying. Few nurses from the clinic somehow helped to her vehicle. She just wanted to get away from them. She wanted to see Chad. She wanted to look him in the eye and ask if it's true. Deep inside she knew Chad wouldn't do that to her but she just couldn't stop the flood of doubts and fears rushing through her mind. That's when she noticed that the paparazzis were following her car. She just wanted to get away from them. All she remembers is a loud horn of a truck in front of her,then she was flying through the air. She didn't even feel the fall. Everything was numb for a while. As she felt blood dripping down her face she thought about her baby. She prayed after a long time that her insecurities didn't cost her her baby. That was the last thought she had before everything went dark... blissful darkness...

Chad was angry at his assistant. Not only did his assistant mess up the dates for booking tickets home,that idiot was missing. Chad was waiting in his room , fuming at his assistant. He really wanted to go home and spend time with his wife. She said there was a surprise for him. "Where is that incompetent fool" ,Chad thought to himself. Just then there was a knock on the door. It was Bianca. He really didn't have time for anyone. He just wanted to find his assistant and know what was going on. "What happened,why are you not home",Bianca asked. Chad explained,"my assistant mixed up the dates for booking. He booked tickets for tomorrow instead of today. And instead of informing me about the mix up that idiot is missing and I can't get a hold of him"."what's the hurry to go home. I was looking forward to dinner with you one last time before we finished the shooting" Bianca asked. Chad could feel a headache coming" it's my birthday today. My wife really wanted to spend this day with me. It's been such a long time since we could celebrate something together like this. Now everything is ruined.". Bianca said" I'm so sorry that you had to miss your flight on your birthday. Wish I could help you. But maybe we can still have a small party for your birthday". Chad was not at all interested in celebrating anything now. But Bianca somehow convinced the crew members to throw a birthday party for Chad. They all went to a nearby club afterwards. Chad was only half interested but for everyone this was a last chance to be together before the shooting was completed. So he convinced himself to atleast act happy. After a few drinks the crowd began to mellow out. There was a slow song playing in the background. Bianca asked, "dance with me?". What could it hurt,he wasn't much of a dancer. Chad agreed. They were just drifting to the tune when Bianca just kissed him all of a sudden. Chad stood still due to shock for a second. He immediately pushed her away. "What the hell are you doing Bianca? I'm married." Chad was fuming. Bianca looked around and saw that all eyes were on them. She didn't want to make the scene there so she just left the club. Chad couldn't believe how his day was going. He just left for his room . Next day everyone was acting awkward around him. He just chalked it up to what had happened last night. What he didn't know was Bianca had called her called paparazzis back home and informed them about her "alleged" affair with Chad.

By the end of the day Chad was drained. He just wanted to go home and snuggle up with his sweet Sara. He was packing his bags when someone knocked his door. It was the director, his face was flushed and eyes were sympathetic,"Chad why didn't you pick your call? It's your wife. She was in an accident" Chad couldn't hear the rest. He collapsed on the floor. It was happening again. Fate was snatching away the one thing in his life that he valued. Couldn't lose his Sara. Chad didn't remember how he reached the hospital. All he knew is that his wife was lying in the bed. There were tubes attached to her nose and mouth. A hundred machines beeping all at the same time. He just fell on his knees and begged god to spare his Sara. Doctor had already informed him that they lost the baby. There was so much bleeding. Oh god, he should have been home with his wife. They wouldn't have lost their baby if he just came home like he had promised. He broke so many promises. He didn't even have the strength to move from the floor.

*I read this story in 2002. Every few months I come to this page to see if there was some ending. Finally I just got fed up of not having a closure,so I just tried my hand at writing. I'm really sorry for the length or any mistakes I've made. I've never written anything like this before. Just let me know if you want me to continue.*

Can someone finish this?

I wonder, where are you now author? Hope you're doing well. Don't leave us cliffhanging

I can't understand how an unfinished story could win a prize. Shame on the judges!!

The start was very well wrtten but the no ending, shame on the author. I wpuld npy fare to start reading any new srory from him. A 5 turned into a two amd it should have been less but frpm yje promising beginning.

Sadly this is now a terrible hang over as the end is still out in the dark …. You have statted a lovely tale and bang vanishing …. Pity, you writing style is extraordinary and may this will come to an end

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