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by Chagrined02/09/05

a little harsh, folks

don't write in the tense or person you used. Try first person. Also, don't try straight sex stuff to begin with. Develop a story. Get and editor...a read editor not just a spelling grammar checker as they are worthless.

Then try again! :-)

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