All Comments on 'Beach Voyeur deja vu'

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Brilliant

wonderful depth of feeling, and I am a sucker for a good beach poem.

mentioned in Wednesday review

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
nice poem

I like the phrase skittle suits. The rhyme isn't bad at all, but I bet this poem would be even better without it. :)

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
~

It did seem like you've seen it all, here's a cheers back at you.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

A sobering thought

When the beach you've grown up with

Outgrows & ignores you.

When did we become old?

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
After...

Youthful days behind him ~ if he is to remain ~ he needs a different beach gig. Mothers with children are good.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SURFS UP

and its weeding time at dusk. TK U MLJ LV NV

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