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TathagataTathagataabout 19 years ago
Nice

slice of life.

almost haiku like and it's paints a big picture with so few words.

Well done

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepabout 19 years ago
Your Poem

Is mentioned in the New Poetry Reviews, in the Poetry Discussion Forum! Yay!

~D.A.

steve portersteve porterabout 19 years ago
this is the beginning

of a good poem.

lindianalindianaabout 19 years ago
mmmmmmm

rhubarb pie...mmmmm

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