All Comments on 'Camilla's Cuckold'

filthy and naughty! I like the inventive humiliations - you hardly ever read stories where the wife eats the cream pie. Good stuff, sweets! Thanks, LJ.

Excellent story within the appropriate category. Well done sweet.

Pissing ?? How erotic "NOT" - Almost as bad as the cuckolding of her!!! Do they eat shit too???

Who are they friends or married couple???

What a story! I was only sidetracked for a moment when you said wife after saying boyfriend. Gotta fix that. Can't wait to read the next part.

I have a cute little wife I would like to do this to.

Interesting take on the cuckold genre. On literotica, most cuckold stories go something like this.

"I'm a pathetic white man with a cock that's 2 in long and .5 in wide. I just think black guys are awesome, so I invited one over to fuck my hot, white, super-model wife. I wasn't surprised to see that he had a cock 16 in long and 5 in wide when erect. Ever since that day, my wife has been a whore for black cock and she won't have sex with me. We have a bunch of mixed-race kids all from her various lovers. This is so great because black guys are so cool and I am such a wimp."

If these guys have such a thing for black dudes, there is a gay male section of this website where they can indulge their fantasies. This story rocked, except for the pissing and human toilet nonsense.

Great story!!! I would have like to have read that she was rimming you while her boyfriend was fucking her. Can't wait until part two

I loved this theme and would like to read more.

Now her boyfriend was doing things that she would never be able to do, not with her own body anyways.................................................................................................... SO WAS HE HUSBAND OR boyfriend?

It was a decent story, but were they married or not? Some sentences had him as her husband and others as her boyfriend. It was a bit distracting to the storyline. Otherwise, it was a fairly decent story.

It is a great storyline, but it needs editing.

a decent editor.

But you really need to read the comments. You're technical writing skills blow chunks.

She should buy the wife a chastity belt and keep the wife hot bothered and frustrated, always!

I hated it.

Not only is the story dreadful, so is the writing - errors in tense, spelling, grammar. One minute he's her boyfriend, then her husband. Just ridiculous.

Loved it, one of my favourite!!!!