All Comments on 'The Reward'

I've always said that I don't post PC's on poems because I believe they are intensely personal. Then, I come upon ones such as these and I just need to let the author know...you've touched me.

Keep writing your wonderful prose. I'll be watching.

Bravo and Kudos on a job done beautifully.

v~

Loved it Carson! You are ultimately my fave Lit author and this has just set that even more in my mind. Keep up the awesome work hun.

As I would expect. You might want to try "reward for" instead of "reward of". Be careful of your tenses, toward the end you go from plural to singular (something) and back to plural again. Minor, minor, minor things, but I know you are a perfectionist!

Love it, from one who will never walk away.

Loved this.. very simple but so deep.. makes one feel, think and reflect on just how they are leading their life..

Powerful write~

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Du~

Lean, tight, simple, and strong. Wonderful work with a real power to it.

It doesn't suck!!! ;)

Wow... Nice lil poem.

I loved your wording.

Tight and kept me till the end.

The message... two thumbs up..

Ya got my vote here~!!

More Please~

and love...your words hold much weight ~ simply put, yet beautifully worded..

~Honey

Very simple and yet elegant. Nice job carson.

I loved this one too...both content and style.