All Comments on 'The Bet Ch. 01'

Great story but you left us hanging. Want to see how you seduce this older chick and get her to scream and cream.

Good buildup should be a hot finish

One of the best buildups I've seen in a while. Looking forward to the rest.

You present a great visual read, please explore how both women are feeling about each other before the girlfriend seduces her boyfriend's mother more

. This story is one of the better written stories on this site. The ending, I believe should maybe bring us the unexpected... nice writing.

Just wow. Best I've read in ages.

and 5, 6, 7, 8, 9.....

if chapter 2 wasnt already available i probably would have rated this less than 5 stars. but my interest is piqued, my cock is hard, so it's on to chapter 2 i go!