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I started with poet mother woman and wanted to read more of you. I'm glad that poem brought me to this gem. I rarely look at erotic poetry, but this had more than sex involved. It spoke truths of man and woman.

I'm going to read the others. A striking poem indeed.

'tie me down and ravish me

but I control you anyway'

Yes you do from the beginning to the end of this poem, very nice. I'll be reading more of your work.

TY Bill

Oh so true! ~Minx

This is art! Thanks!

Nice work.

Beautiful and very tight.

and sweet. You've beautifully captured the eroic tpull and tug between two people. Great work! Thank you. LJ

I'm normally not aroused by erotic poetry but I found myself reading this one again and again. Appropriately the rhythm of the poem aptly befits the title as well as the body of the work (no pun intended). I'm not sure if this was intentional, but it plays out well.

I have been reading your poems.

English is not my mother tongue.

I really enjoyed reading this

~ raw sexuality is Life.

~Dip