All Comments on 'Meeting Jessica Rabbit'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
The dumbiest story ever

I'm sorry but this has to be the worse story ever told on literotica. Please come back with something more real.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
promise unfulfilled

Actually, I thought the idea of the story was amusing and promising. Unfortunately the language barrier got in the way. Perhaps you should write your stories in your native language, because (and someone has to tell you this) what you're writing is NOT english. The WORDS seem to be english but the sentences definitely ARE NOT.

Sean RenaudSean Renaudabout 19 years ago
Keep trying pal

At least I have the balls to leave my name when I tell you suck. But you suck. I won't nail you on typos cus I make em too, lots of em. But your charachter didn't feel anything like Jessica Rabbit and your writing just isn't detailed enough at all. Still the concept was great and I'm sure you're getting lots of readers so you've got one half of your job done already, attracting readers, now you just have too hook em.

st8184an2st8184an2almost 18 years ago
not bad of an attempt

I liked the story, but it could have been more. Very creative part. Suggest you redo it and make it more interesting. Goodluck

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Brilliant

This was amazing do another 1 please the story was brill jessica rabbit is sexuall and her tits ohhhhhh I jerk off still over her n look up websites n watch her in tht movie dancing n jerk off to it I can't help it I wish she was real no one knows what I would do to her titty fuck first though defo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Lul

She was standing naked over you and then took her clothes off?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
beutifull

dude wish that stuff rally happend ur not alone : ...( *sniff*

reader018reader018almost 13 years ago

Great story! But too many puction mistakes and missing words!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Did a five year old write this?

The grammar was awful. There was no real structure. No in depth explanations and descriptions. Bad writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You're barely literate; why try to write?

You don't know basic punctuation, or grammar at a middle-school level.

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