All Comments on 'Elephant Leg'

I loved this.. the intimacy revealed in both the small things of the loved ones and the vulnerablity of the desires of the lover... wow..

transcendent!

ty for the read..

Du~

your poem is featured on the Sunday review

Well, I voted! And I liked it... you really know your subject! *wink

Boo

Great poem. It truly demonstrates that no matter how much we think we know someone, there are always parts of themselves that will never be revealed.

as I was reading your exquisite assessment of your loved one all the while wondering, "why the hell would he have chosen "ELEPHANT LEG" as this so fragile poem's title?" - until I got to the final verse. DUH!!! <rolling My eyes>.

This was beautifully laid out with delicate details and My favorite of these, " I know the moment when your hip becomes belly. Just there." just rocked Me! I could go on and on, but I'm going to stop now and let another fortunate reader have their turn with this piece. And give you another "5" <smile>

Vixxx

is what brought me to this piece. the imagery you've created is very nice, and thoughts come in layers as one reads it. great job!!!........don