by Goldeniangel
Sweet, sexy story. You make the reader root for your characters.
Great story, with great characters...
If I knew then what I know now, I woulda, coulda, shoulda had a whole lot more fun!!
That was freaking adorable!!
If first times could be like that for everyone!
ADORABLE!!
well done great set of character's and a totally beleivable plot! ;)
Kisses,
T
That has to be the sexiest sweetest most true to life expeirence with a lot less of the fumbling i have ever read that had em thought just thinking of being Dana
If my first time had been like this... well... it just would have been better.
I loved it. And as normal,... it leaves space to be continued.
Brill job...
Amba.. the london girl...
Still a virgin here and damn do I wish my first time will b like that. Awesome story line.
Very nice story of two people discovering lovemaking and them selfs and the boy being gentle and understanding for her first time.
Thanks for such a loving, gentle and caring love story of two young people. Very nice for a change of pace over some of the other stories around. Well written!
Aww that was absolutely sweet. I had some little baby tears on the end
Lovely! Great story with a fantastic ending, couldn't have ended better.
Oh my goodness, how sweet, loved Dana’s innocence and her getting what she wanted for so long but was way too shy to ask for! Coming from another “Dana”, I just clicked with her character, even to the “don’t stop”.
My “Brad” was an experienced, inexperienced guy with one longtime girlfriend and two times having sex with her. We had been going out for around three months when our opportunity arose, parents were gone to his sister’s across the state for the weekend. He knew I was a virgin, he gave me every opportunity to back out. Like Dana, it was me who wanted him so much that every time he gave me the opportunity to stop, I urged him on. (By this time I wasn’t shy at all with him). Six years later, he’s my one and only.