All Comments on 'Carnivale'

Whilst I was disappointed with the illustration (confetti?)

I loved your story, incest always turns me on. Well wriiten with just enough erotic suspense. I enjoyed it.

By putting this in illustrated with that pathetic of an excuse as 'illustration', it came across more like you were trying to sneak an incest story into a category it shouldn't have been in. I enjoy incest stories, and while brief and predictable, enjoyed this story. But by trying to place it in illustrated with that?!?!?! Sorry, you lost me.

The illustrations are fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!