All Comments on 'New Moon Pt. 01'

by GrimmsOtherBrother

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
wOW

This was too hot PLEASE continue!!!!!!! i would love to see the mother surender ot her inner beast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Keep going . . .

This story has great potential, please keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
EXCELLENT FIRST STORY!!!

You have scored a winner on your first try, not many people can say that. The storyline and characters are outstanding you should honestly consider turning this into a short series. Erotic Horror has such great potential yet very few good writers will try it.

Keep up the great writing!

Joel

dammit51dammit51about 17 years ago
Yeah....It's HOT.

Kudos to you, this is one wicked hot piece of erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Funny end

That was hilarious.

Anonymous
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