All Comments on 'Epitaph'

... I struggled a little bit with the cadence, I loved the feel of this verse. It reminded me of my grandfather's plot on a bend in the Ohio River. Thanks. ~Imp

This is a good poem and paints a lovely picture, but it

does read off a little. I'm being burned and thrown out

of an SUV at high tide at 25mph, but I do like this

plot you have pictured here.

Sure, it may need a little more tweaking, but many poems do.

This one part may need one less rhyming word:

A nice serene scene

for my last day dream

I think serene scene isn't working (in this poem).

Once again, it's a good poem! :)

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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