All Comments on 'Whispers in the Dark Ch. 01'

Great start, I am looking forward to reading the next installment.

can't wait to see how your story ends!

hugs and kisses...

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I ask anyone reading this to see my own contribution(s) and vote. (look up Mark2)I love feedback. There is one problem in this story. Breast suction and nipple torture. How many breasts does she have? 2? 4? Just a simple thing really. An extra s. It made the difference between a 4 and a 5.