All Comments on 'Verbotan'

I really liked this poem- it's a a great piece and I totally relate to the feeling of it.

Erotica excellence~

a poem with lots of passion

Tie me,

spank me,

slip it in slow and hot

Please,

touch me in all those dark, secret and trembling spots.

nice poem~

erotic poem of 2005? So far, yes.

I like this girl, save me one for next weekend. I read

this because Syn. told me to. I had to look up the title

and found the effort was worth it. 'I am early Saturday

mornings', when you lick close to home you get fives.

I liked this poem, but think you could do more with it. You set us up with the title; why is she verboten (note the spelling)? She is certainly a willing and adventurous partner, but an element of risk seems missing.

with syndra ..a keeper for 2005....very good..blue

A good one.

Filled with fire and passion thank you for the read .. mentioned in the Sunday reviews..

du lac

This is fantastic. Superb. Love it. Thank you. LJ

Is always the tastiest. Great job Sabina!.

I decided to see what else you have, and well

definitive desire, wants and need spoken with a strength that I like, a very feminine erotic, now the title hints at something wore wicked.....possibly infidelity or maybe forbidden love, or even sex it's self being forbidden, 5!

thy name be Sabina T. TK U MLJ LV NV