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by Bill Dada

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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funny!!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
shortest poem ever????

laughing, true to zen wisdom,

say little and mean alot ...

excellent wording!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Cute,

but not poetry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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Cute.. I smiled and loved the wit.. no worries on the not poetry line.. wonder what they would say about one lined haikus??? mentioned in the sunday reviews..

du lac

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~over 18 years ago
Hee Hee

Cute, very cute and funny.

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
I agree...

with your wordy

wicked cleverness..

lmao...

-sGp-

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
Rising with Zen

First I enjoyed the humor and playfulness. I enjoy the play on (early) 'to bed' on one hand and 'Tibet' on the other which could give a whole new meaning to 'rise'. I come to realize that a wise Zenist (a Zen -person) would most likely adopt this text of observation ...

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
Hilarious!

How very zen of you!

normal jeannormal jeanover 14 years ago
I love

a good sense of humor, and this poem-ette.

hugs,

NJ

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