All Comments on 'Petting Party'

Decent story! More details were needed!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

pretty good story

a little short and seemed to go to fast.

jackie

Good story could have been a lot lobger with more detail

Heck, I liked it...LOL*...But from me, there usually is a next chapter, in fact, it's already submitted for approval.

MGM..

This was an absolutely great story, but I disagree with those of you who wanted it longer and more detailed. Many of the stories I read on this and other erotic story sites are dragged out and made so convoluted that I lose my interest in them. If I want a novel, I'll go to Chapters and buy one.

This one was perfect. Long enough to let you think back and put yourself in the author's place (and develop a good stiffy imagining the time he had), but not so long as to get lost in itself.

If further adventures were had, bring 'em on, but keep them short and simple.

Joe

Unpretentious straight up stroke story. Good job.

thank you for this great story that reminded me of a simmler adventure that my wife and I had many years ago. we were hot tubing with close friends and ended up changing partners for fun and sex. It was Great.

Very believable - Actually reminds me of a real incident which didn't go that far, much to my disappointment.

We need a continuation on this one....very, very badly! Very hot and erotic, and I don't see anything about birth control, which makes it even better!

Sweet and sexy little story.I enjoyed it very much.Great fun for all envolved.That is the way sex,and love should be.

This is practically a total ripoff of MagicHands' stories about exposing Sharon. Right down to the names Sharon and Sonny, although he used Laura to your Lori.

Loved your other stories, but have to wonder if those are ripoffs as well.

No, not a ripoff...my story...but could it be real? By the way, the last poster wins the Gold Handled Pisspot...LOL..Wondered when someone would notice.

Perhaps the story is true, perhaps.

(It is...) still..just stories..for entertainment.

MGM

can't wait for the next chapter. Your writng is excellent and totally believable.

The girls set this all up to get unlimited access to shoes!! What fiends!

We've frequently participated in similar parties, including swapping partners, but didn't go quite as far as the couples in this arousing story. The simple pleasures of exhibitionism and voyeurism, combined with intimate caressing while watching and being watched, was enough to stimulate each of us to orgasm. Once again Magmaman has created another sensuous tale for all Literotica readers to enjoy. We hope he continues coming up with creative variations of all things sexual.

My husband and I read this together...by the time I finished the story I had his beautiful cock in my mouth. Loved this story! We talked about it and want to experience something like this ourselves...maybe we'll have our own adventures to write about soon. God, I can't wait to watch my husband fuck another woman while he watches another guy's cock is thrusting in and out of my shaved, wet pussy. Wow, I need to come right now....

You write better than most on here and you set the whole thing up nicely. Most on here don't bother setting up their story.

Well done.

Sweet? Yes, it was uncomplicated, everyone just went with it, and it meant nothing other than "doesn't this feel good?"

I very much liked that this did not go over the top which made it quite believable. I also liked that you kept the relationships intact while the progression went from exhibitionistic displays to touching and finally to unplanned sex with the other wife. Good story!

I bet we are in for a ride now -

Your pace of building sexual conflict was excellent. I was not expecting Lori's husband, even in his youth, to make a decision such as he did without allowing her to speak privately about swapping between friends first. I understand plenty of private communication occurs between a couple thru a look and facial expressions but this was a conversation starter, in my opinion.

I really enjoyed you putting fur on Lori. Quite honestly I did not read anything about Sharon giving up her white panty. Following along in that vein of thought there was nothing revealed about how she groomed her sex.

I am looking forward to your next chapter.

Idiot parents breaking up a family.

Fun fact: my wife and I visited a swing club by our house (out of curiosity). The bartender at the club said that every regular swinger had been married at least twice and had multiple kids from each partner.

This activity Nevers good for the family.

Next step swapping, the refuge of a man who needs help.

Fresh fucking opens lot of doors.

I love kissing not enough stories do it justice -this one did!!!

Very well done. Loved the build up and the occasional glimpse of a furry little muff. It was hot that both guys seemed to be on the same page about exposing their wives charms to the other. Gave me a hard on as well. It went from petting to full blown sex in a hurry, but that’s understandable under the spell of new and exciting sex. Would love to have done that with my wife.

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It happened organically. Nothing planned.

A good way for these things to happen