by Boxlicker101
Your story was well written, with great details, as well as very arousing. I wanna be a werewolf!
very very good story. sounds like you know what you're talking about. would love to read some more on the same topic.
I liked the story, and kudos for writing and submitting it! I'm glad they didn't give you any trouble about posting it. Didn't think they would (as I said in your thread) but it's always chancy with this kind of tale. I thought you took an interesting look at the subject, with their well-thought-out precautions and all. Safe sex with werewolves, cool!
Really enjoyed this story! Would love to be the wife! Hope you write more along this line.
I'm really fussy when it comes to the linguistic side of things - grammar etc. It puts me off when people write in a sloppy manner in their eagerness to fit as much action into the text as possible. Your story flows really well, the style is really natural and articulate and, all combined, this allowed me to concentrate on what is a really excellent story.
for a werewolf story NOT starring any Twilight cast! Refreshing! (and VERY hot!)
Your attention to detail is amazing. Loved the oven mitts! Technicals (spelling, grammer) was well done too, so nothing spoiled the flow. Nice.