All Comments on 'Pink Balloon'

by Belegon

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impressiveimpressiveabout 19 years ago
Beautiful

Know the feeling well -- and you captured it perfectly. ~Imp

sacksackabout 19 years ago
which is why, whenever children are concerned.....

I always buy 2-3 balloons...they don't last!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
"...In love we are all children."

beautiful. simple adaptations of feelings, eloquently put.

Well, done, handsome!

ReltneReltneabout 19 years ago
pins & needles

I gave up after the evil clown burst the third one in a row, and settled for the cotton candy. :(

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Bravo!

great sentiment, well written!

RebeccaLeahRebeccaLeahabout 19 years ago
I like

...the parrallel you drew. Very fitting in a way I've never thought of before now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful

images you create with this poem, Bel. I love the bittersweet tale it tells...

~Honey

SweetVASweetVAalmost 19 years ago
Here's to the bittersweetness of...

...pink balloons. May they remind us to treasure what we have. Thanks, Bel. VA

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