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Lunch Time Surprise Ch. 3

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/30/04

GREAT FUCK STORY..but

The first guy should have kept her and knocked her up!!!

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by hakawati09/12/06

p1-2-3

I really enjoyed your series. You kept the sex short and to the point and this let the story still get told.

Now I think the wife might want to do something "special" to make her man want her enough to never stray again.

You left it keeping me wondering... really well done.

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by Anonymous03/12/07

every1 hates raymond

gud story...luv all da parts 2 dis stories!

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by Anonymous03/05/09

Stupid Story

This story basically is portraying women as a piece of meat. You don't even think that those women (girls) are someones friend, sister, and/or daughter. Just look at them as if they are here only for our satisfaction. Stupid, stupid, story. It seems like something one will find at a porn place.

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by chestydd05/19/09

What a great fantasy

What a great fantasy!! Some domination rough sex was a great story. Hope to read many more

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by Anonymous10/01/09

hmm

i tried to get in to it.. i tried so very hard to get into it. the story had so much potential but the execution was shit, bad descriptions, jumpy story line blugh. i was an 18 yr old school girl 2 yrs ago and always had the older man forced upon me fantasy but i think u just ruined it

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